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Meka Moongoon24@aol.com 2004-08-20 id # 267632 *is crying, very much literally* I really can't express how incredible the fic that you wrote is. I'm a...MAJOR Willow and Tara fan, and you're fic is just...it's...it's INCREDIBLE. I don't know how to say it any other way. I'm so impressed, so HAPPY that you took the time to bring people such a wonderful story. I really hope more people have read this story, and if not, EVERY Willow and Tara should read this fic. Hell, it should be PUBLISHED. Suriously. I only wish I hadn't ended, but thank you, THANK YOU for ending it that way. Such a perfect ending to such an entirely perfect story. I ESPECIALLY loved how you put in things from the show, things they both said and did, things that only uber-Buffy fans would know. I loved it. Once again, thank you for giving the Willow and Tara lovers of the world such a wonderful story. I, for one, appreciate it.

Queen Zulu 2004-06-20 id # 236557 Now here's why this story is so fucking brilliant ('scuse my French, y'all, but I feel the need to be emphatic): you have taken the Wishverse and made it your own. You have so many beautiful details that add realism to the story. I love the relationship between Faith and Buffy, between Puppy and Willow, and especially the trust between Tara and Willow. It's all so gorgeous. I think I might swoon. You've created a world that's rough and hard and mean and 'red in tooth and claw', but at the same time everyone has a chance. They all make mistakes, and bad things happen, but in the end there's hope for a recovery. Maybe. Unless more mistakes are made. And I know, even though the fic's over, that these people are going to continue with their fractured, messy lives, and more mistakes will be made, and it'll all be awesome because the 'verse is real. I wish it were longer. Anyanka? Hear that? Huh?

mike wizathogwarts@yahoo.com 2004-06-16 id # 234679 Greetings, This is a very good start and a serious work of fiction. You have developed the character motivations smoothly through each scene. What is especially noteworthy is the clear message that a being with a soul can be driven to heinous acts and one without a soul can choose a path of good. Buffy's losses that she recites with each torturous act show a person who once loved and was loved can become merciless. Vamp Willow's responses, remembering the things in Tara's room, comparison of her torture to when she played with puppy, show that a soul may not be necessary for compassiona and love. Can Buffy be redeemed before she goes too far? Can Vamp Willow sustain her new found perspective in spite of the demonic urgings within? Would Tara Kill a human to protect a demon. I certainly hope you answer these questions soon. thank you -mike

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Howard Russell2004.06.14 - 02:51AM3: 'Rise' Signed
Read This. This is good astoundingly good.

Elen2004.06.13 - 06:34PM3: 'Rise' Signed
I don't even know where to start. This is just fascinating. I love the conflict that you've established between the witches and the Slayers. The relationship between Tara and Willow is lovely.

Gina2004.06.16 - 07:18AM1: 'NIGHT', 'DARK' Signed
I don't know where to begin, wonderful setting, very well writing of Amy, Tara in this setting. You've writen the slayers fabulously, just like on the show, I'd get mad at Buffy then feel badly for her. I love this story!!

Thinkbtvs2004.06.18 - 05:42PM8: 'SUN three' Signed
This was a fantastic story, I'm sorry to see it come to an end. Any plans for a sequel? I loved the nuances of the plot and the excellent characterizations. I liked how in a sense all of the characters were slowly approaching redemption, especially Buffy. I would love to se you expand this universe, but if not I will definately look forward to anything you write in the future.

DragonWriter172004.06.23 - 12:00PM8: 'SUN three' Signed
Excellent story! It made me worry, it made me hope, it made me laugh, it made me cry (it made me hot)...in short, it moved me. I think you should definitely consider doing a sequel.